The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010.

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spend

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in the UK by tourists over a period of 20 years and why they visited

this

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country.

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visitors spent more and more

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by

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the

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apply

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time went

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though we can see frequent declines during the whole timeframe.

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, there were 4 reasons for

visit

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visiting

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: Holiday, Business, Visiting friends or relatives, and others. Looking at the pie charts, the proportion

for

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of

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holiday

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holidays

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accounted for 44.1% in 1980.

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, it declined by 5% 20 years later, comprising 39.1%. It still remained as the first place among them. Only 9.8% of people answered that they came for other

reason

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. The other two,

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, experienced increases

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2.1%,

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and 9.5

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% respectively. Focusing on the line graph, from 1992 to 1995, the

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they spent in the United Kingdom rose by around 3,000 which was the biggest increase across the years.

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, it can be seen that tourists spent the largest amount of

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in 1995, peaking at 12,000 million.