The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The two maps provided compare the two layouts of the town of Westley, from 1815 to the actual one.
Overall
, either
maps
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describes major changes. The town hall and the market square are the only buildings that stand still presently. The transportation
infraestructure
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infrastructure
saw a few changes too,
whereas
the lack of green spaces is noticeable when
it is
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compared to the past. The
transportantion
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transportation
changed significantly, since in 1815 there
were
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solely a road which connected the fields with Tinton Village and London.
This
last
connection was available by the
twone
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toll bridge. Nowadays, the road
existent
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connects the tinton village with the shopping, business and residential area.
Furthermore
, a railway has been deployed, crossing the river where the bridge used to be. The building layout saw a different distribution, where the fields and
lenton
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woods were eliminated in order to build up new road facilities, the main rail station and a cinema. The houses were
also
substituted by a business and residential area.
Lastly
, Lord Westley's house, the coach Inn
an
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the
curch
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church
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were slightly altered so that
it
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facilitates
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the construction of the Lenton Hotel, the Red Lion, the sports centre, the museum and the
west
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West
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Gate shopping centre that remain today.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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