The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps provided compare the two layouts of the town of Westley, from 1815 to the actual one.

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, either

maps

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map

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describes major changes. The town hall and the market square are the only buildings that stand still presently. The transportation

infraestructure

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infrastructure

saw a few changes too,

whereas

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the lack of green spaces is noticeable when

it is

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apply

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compared to the past. The

transportantion

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transportation

changed significantly, since in 1815 there

were

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was

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solely a road which connected the fields with Tinton Village and London.

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last

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connection was available by the

twone

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toll bridge. Nowadays, the road

existent

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exists

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connects the tinton village with the shopping, business and residential area.

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, a railway has been deployed, crossing the river where the bridge used to be. The building layout saw a different distribution, where the fields and

lenton

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Lenton

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woods were eliminated in order to build up new road facilities, the main rail station and a cinema. The houses were

also

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substituted by a business and residential area.

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, Lord Westley's house, the coach Inn

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the

curch

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church

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were slightly altered so that

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they

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facilitates

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facilitated

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the construction of the Lenton Hotel, the Red Lion, the sports centre, the museum and the

west

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West

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Gate shopping centre that remain today.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

205 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
establishment

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