The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph illustrates information regarding the tea and

coffee

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-taking habits of people residing in five different nations.

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, it is crystal clear that having a

coffee

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by visiting the cafe only is the most common thing among individuals in every country,

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the demand for fresh

coffee

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is at its lowest.

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with, customers purchasing instant

coffee

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is nearly the same in any other nation,

although

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, it is still the highest in Hobart(54%), the lowest in Melbourne at 48%, followed by Sydney which is only at 45%. On the one hand, going to the shop and buying tea is the most preferable trend in Melbourne(63%) and

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1% more than in Hobart. Interestingly, there is a difference of 2% from Sydney.

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, it is at its

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in Brisbane and Adelaide and

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56% and 49%, respectively.

On the other hand

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, the intake of fresh

coffee

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is not much in any nation nearly the same in Sydney and Melbourne at 42% and in Brisbane and Adelaide, it is 34% only.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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