The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates information regarding the tea and
coffee
-taking habits of people residing in five different nations.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that having a
coffee
by visiting the cafe only is the most common thing among individuals in every country,
while
the demand for fresh
coffee
is at its lowest.
To begin
with, customers purchasing instant
coffee
is nearly the same in any other nation,
although
, it is still the highest in Hobart(54%), the lowest in Melbourne at 48%, followed by Sydney which is only at 45%. On the one hand, going to the shop and buying tea is the most preferable trend in Melbourne(63%) and
that is
1% more than in Hobart. Interestingly, there is a difference of 2% from Sydney.
However
, it is at its
down
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in Brisbane and Adelaide and
that is
56% and 49%, respectively.
On the other hand
, the intake of fresh
coffee
is not much in any nation nearly the same in Sydney and Melbourne at 42% and in Brisbane and Adelaide, it is 34% only.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • consumption
  • beverage
  • preference
  • compare
  • quantities
  • supermarkets
  • cafes
  • consume
  • patterns
  • notable
  • significant
  • trends
  • demographic
  • gender
  • habit
  • occasionally
  • frequently
  • cultural influence
  • workdays
  • weekends
  • paraphrase
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • draw conclusions
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