The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates three main kinds of fuel
petroleum
, coal and natural gas in the United Kingdom over the period
of 19 years from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
, both the proportion of petroleum
and natural gas witnessed upward trends while
the figure for coal experienced a contrasting movement over the given period
.
The amount of energy produced by petroleum
started at 95 million
tonnes
of oil, then
decreased noticeably which was followed by a sharp rise to 140 million
in 1996. To the last
of the period
in 2000, the production levels of petroleum
climbed slightly and peaked at 142 million
tonnes
- one of the biggest levels in 3 kinds of fuels. In addition
, the proportion of natural gas increased minimally and remained unchanged at around 39 to 40 million
tonnes
. In the next 5 years, this
data also
witnessed a dramatic growth of 43 million
tonnes
but later rose slightly by 101 million
tonnes
in 2000. Finally
, the date of coal also
started at 80 million
tonnes
,
but later dropped remarkably and hit a bottom at 38 Remove the comma
apply
million
tonnes
. From 1986 to 1991, this
figure for coal maintained
at around 60 Add a missing verb
was maintained
million
, which led to fluctuate
at around 60 Replace the word
fluctuation
million
in next
5 years and declined slightly by 2 Correct article usage
the next
million
tonnes
at the end
of the period
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