The diagram below shows how honey is made in small-scale commercial production.
The illustration presents the process of
honey
manufacturing in a small-sized commercial production.
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Overall
, there are Linking Words
number
of different stages that ensure that the Change the article
a number
the number
honey
is properly collected and sent to the Use synonyms
further
stage where it is processed and prepared for selling. These include gathering honeycombs, filtering, and distribution.
The first stage of the process starts with the bee stage, where nectar collected by bees Linking Words
are
transformed into Change the verb form
is
honey
and, Use synonyms
thus
, is deposited into a special construction. Linking Words
Then
, bees dry the substance with their wings and they make sure the cells are kept clean.
The human phase starts with Linking Words
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honey comb
gathering, which Correct your spelling
honeycomb
are going
through a process called pressing combs and , eventually, Wrong verb form
goes
honey
flows through a faucet. Collected product is, Use synonyms
further
, poured into a sump tank and is filtered through a sieve tank which ensures that the dirt is removed, and after that, it settles for 2-4 days. The product is poured into jars and transported for commercialization.Linking Words
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