The table below shows the percentage of men and women employed in four different types of industries in one twon in 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The table below shows the percentage of men and women employed in four different types of industries in one twon in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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The table compares the
Men
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and
Women
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in terms of employment in four categories called : manufacturing,
health
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, retail shops and
tourism
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in 3 particular years.
Overall
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,
while
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in
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the highest level was
tourism
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,in
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it was manufacturing.
To begin
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with, in 1990
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were at 13% in retail shops,
however
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,
Women
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were at 7%.
Health
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in
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was at 7%
while
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in
Women
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at 9%.When
Women
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’s manufacture was just at 7%,in
Men
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’s
this
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index was a record high percentage at 30%,at 10% less was in
Women
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.The
last
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type of employment was
tourism
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in
Men
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’s it was 13%, 10% more was in
Women
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.In 2000 and 2010 the retail stores didn’t change and it was at 13%,in
Women
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it was
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similar at
8and 9%.The
health
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in 2000 was the same as in 1990,
however
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, in 2010, it grew a little to 9%.Whenever in 2000 Manufacture was more than
Tourism
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at 15 and 10%,in 2010 they were equal 10% each.In
Women
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between 2000 and 2010, the figure for
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was 11 and 15%.The average figure was Manufacture in
2000’s
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2000s
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at 8%,
whereas
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in 2010 it dropped to 3%.The
last
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index was
Tourism
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between 2000 and 2010 there are some differences, at 25 to 27%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last, while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, health, tourism with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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