The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides information about citizens'
coffee
and tea consumption habits in five different areas (
Sydney
,
Melbourune
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Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.
Overall
, going to a cafe to grab a
coffee
or tea was the most popular habit in all cities, except Adelaide. Another notable trend is that
while
purchasing fresh
coffee
was the least common custom, the gap between the second common habit, buying
instant
coffee
, varied from city to city. In Melbourne, roughly 64%
residents
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went to a
coffee
shop to get
coffee
or tea in
last
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the last
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four weeks, which was the highest number among five cities including all sectors.
Sydney
, Brisbane and Horbart's
people
also
prefered
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preferred
going to a cafe rather than buying either
instant
or fresh
coffee
with
Sydney
at 61%, Brisbane at 55%, and
Horbart
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Hobart
at 63%.
In contrast
, purchasing
instant
coffee
was slightly popular in Adelaide where half of
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ctizens
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citizens
opted for
instant
coffee
purchase
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purchases
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and 49%
people
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of people
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visited a cafe. In
Sydney
, 44%
people
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prefered
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preferred
fresh
coffee
purchase which was virtually 2% less than the proportion of
people
who bought
instant
coffee
and
this
figure was the lowest among
five
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areas.
On the other hand
,
Horbart
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Hobart
had the largest difference
which
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just under 34%
residents
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chose buying fresh
coffee
and 29% more
people
chose
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instant
coffee
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53%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sydney, instant, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • consumption
  • beverage
  • preference
  • compare
  • quantities
  • supermarkets
  • cafes
  • consume
  • patterns
  • notable
  • significant
  • trends
  • demographic
  • gender
  • habit
  • occasionally
  • frequently
  • cultural influence
  • workdays
  • weekends
  • paraphrase
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • draw conclusions
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