The graph given illustrate the used devices in the 18 to 25 age group in canada used to watch television in two different years(2009 and 2018).

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information about the used

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in

18

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the 18

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to 25 age group to watch television in 2009 and 2018. The figures

given

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in percentages.

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, it can be seen that a majority of teenagers used conventional TV in 2009.

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, a vast

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of people in the 18 to 25 age group used mobile

phone

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in 2019. Looking first at the

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of youngsters

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uesd

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used

devices

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in 2009. The

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for conventional TV was the highest at 34%. At the same time, the 18 to 25 age group used

labtop

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laptop

4 times lower than

tablet

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tablets

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. Meanwhile, the

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for desktop

computer

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was almost as high as the

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for mobile

phon

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phone

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.

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, the

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of youngsters

used

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flat-screen

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flat screens

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at 8%, which was the lowest

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. Moving on to the young

people uesd

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people's

devices

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in 2019. Youngsters used flat-screen at 27%, which was the highest

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of used

devices

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and almost as high as mobile

phone

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phones

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.

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canadian

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Canadians

in

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apply

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aged 18 to 25 who used desktop

computer

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computers

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was

exact

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the same as

labtop

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laptops

. The

figure

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for conventional TV usage was almost 5 times as high as

tablet

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tablets

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.