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The maps give information about the changes in university of Woodward.

The maps describe the changes that have taken place at Woodwards
University
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campus
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 over 37 years, starting from 1985.
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, the modern-day layout of the
campus
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 is a far cry from its previous state. The
university
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campus
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 is no longer accessible by
car
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 after major changes to the road structure. It is
also
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 worth mentioning that the
campus
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 has become more compact with
conversion
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the conversion
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 of different faculty buildings into one. Focusing on the initial appearance of the
campus
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, the
university
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campus
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 was split into north and south wings with a road that ran from east to west. A large
car
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 park could be found in the south-west of the
campus
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, which was directly across the admin building. The main road stretched
further
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 north, leading to the
second,
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smaller
car
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 park, which was flanked by Chemistry and Biology blocks to its north and west respectively. The Physics department building was located in the northernmost part, which was neighbored by a library in the
north-west
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northwest
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. The
campus
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 has seen a total transformation over the past 37 years. The library has been expanded southward, allowing much space for a new IT
center
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centre
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as well as
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 books. All three teaching buildings,
on the other hand
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, have been reconstructed into one, more spacious block called Science Laboratories. The small
car
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 park on the north wing has been removed to make way for a lecture theatre,
while
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 the admin building has shrunk in size and been repositioned more to the
center
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. The most radical change has been the removal of all the roads, which have been supplanted with footpaths connecting all the
building
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buildings
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.
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, the
university
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 is now accessible by
shuttle
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a shuttle
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 bus terminal in the
south west
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southwest
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.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, campus, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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