The chart below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of prisoners in five Use synonyms
countries
in the period from 1930 to 1980.
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Overall
, the highest level of imprisonment was in America and Linking Words
Canada
, Use synonyms
while
the lowest was seen in New Zealand, Australia, and the UK. Linking Words
It is clear that
the total Linking Words
number
of people being imprisoned dropped slightly in the vast majority of these Use synonyms
countries
.
Focusing first on the United States and Use synonyms
Canada
, in 1939, about 100 American citizens had been imprisoned, Use synonyms
whereas
for Linking Words
Canada
, the corresponding figure was 120. By 1940, their Use synonyms
number
rose significantly to nearly 130 in America. Use synonyms
However
, in Linking Words
Canada
, the level of imprisoned criminals dropped to slightly higher than 100, with its following decrease throughout the next years, with about 80 people in 1980. As for the United States, after a significant fall by nearly 40 units, by 1970, the Use synonyms
number
of prisoners increased sharply by the end of the period to almost 140.
As for the remaining Use synonyms
countries
, about 30 British people were in prisons, Use synonyms
while
for Australia and New Zealand, the corresponding figures were considerably higher, with nearly 70 and 100 criminals. By 1970, the proportion of prisoners in these three Linking Words
countries
was slightly lower than 70, with its increase to approximately 80 by 1980. Use synonyms
In contrast
, only less than 50 Australians were in prison Linking Words
this
year.Linking Words
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