The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the level of emigration of
British
people to five selected
countries
throughout the period from 2004 to 2007.
Overall
, the most popular destinations selected by citizens were Australia and Spain,
while
the
least
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ones were New Zealand, America, and France.
It is clear that
the level of
British
citizens
migrated
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to foreign
countries
generally dropped by 2007. Focusing first on the most frequently
preffered
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preferred
countries
, during 2004 and 2005, nearly 40,000 left the UK and moved to Australia,
whereas
for Spain the corresponding figure was 5,000 lower. In 2006, Australia increased in popularity significantly, with 50,000 people migrated there.
However
, by 2007, the percentage of
British
migrants dropped to slightly
abowe
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above
40,000. After 2005, the number of those who chose Spain decreased to approximately 27,000. As for the remaining three
countries
, the popularity of New Zealand and The USA was at the level of between 20,000 and 25,000 migrants from the UK. Regarding France, in 2004,
this
country accepted more than 20,000 overseas people, as opposed to the next year when
this
proportion was nearly 10,000 higher, with its decrease
throughot
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throughout
through
the following years to less than 20,000
of
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British
.
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