The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps illustrate the organization of West
Park
Secondary School from 1950 to 2010. Overall
, the area has been improved and become more comfortable for education by adding several new buildings.
As shown in the maps, firstly
, from 1950 to 1980 the school increased. A new science block instead
of a
three houses made the area better. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Moreover
, there was a brand new car park
near to
the laboratory. A farmland was replaced by a sports field. At Change preposition
apply
this
moment the school building become
the main of Change the verb form
becomes
this
complex.
Secondly
, from 1980 to 2010 the car park
took the biggest part of the area, where earlier had been the sports field and the car park
. The main building and the science block hadn’t changed. However
, the playground had decreased by adding the new small sports field. Finally
, for this
huge period of time
only one place did not change. It was a main road next to the complex.Add a comma
time,
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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