The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
from 2011straightly decrease to 2015. Car theft is the second high
incidents
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incident
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from
2010to
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2010 to
2013, but it
increase
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increases
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form
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from
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2014 to 2019. Robbery is the lowest crime case in Panama it's
keep
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kept
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stability
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from 2010 to 2019.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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