The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows changes in three different
region
of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019
Change to a plural noun
regions
Overall
, burgulary
was the highest crime Correct your spelling
burglary
cases
in Panama Fix the agreement mistake
case
city
before 2014. It Capitalize word
City
was change
from 2011straightly decrease to 2015. Car theft is the second high Change the verb form
was changed
incidents
from Fix the agreement mistake
incident
2010to
2013, but it Correct your spelling
2010 to
increase
Change the verb form
increases
form
2014 to 2019. Robbery is the lowest crime case in Panama it's Correct your spelling
from
keep
Wrong verb form
kept
stability
from 2010 to 2019.Replace the word
stable
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