The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows changes in three different
region
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of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019
Overall
,
burgulary
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burglary
was the highest crime
cases
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case
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in Panama
city
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City
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before 2014. It
was change
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from 2011straightly decrease to 2015. Car theft is the second high
incidents
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from
2010to
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2010 to
2013, but it
increase
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form
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from
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2014 to 2019. Robbery is the lowest crime case in Panama it's
keep
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stability
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from 2010 to 2019.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Crime rates
  • Fluctuated
  • Significant spike
  • Consistent trend
  • Prevalent
  • Cumulative change
  • Enforcement
  • Correlate
  • Reduction/increase in crime
  • Categories of crime
  • Level of crime
  • Period of time
  • Analysis
  • Data representation
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