The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table demonstrates the worldwide market share of notebook computers in 2006, 2007 and 2014.
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, 'HP' was the largest stakeholder with a 31.4% rate in 2006, which increased to 34.25% in 2014 and still remained in first place.
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, the least popular was the 'Fujitsu', with an interest barely exceeding 4% in every period. Between the companies with the highest and the lowest percentage of market share, there were 5 different brands and a category named "Others" whose rate originally was 22%, but declined to 7% over the years but it was not just a specific company. 'Dell'
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showed a decent amount, but it was not able to exceed and overtake 'HP' remaining in 2nd place. Moving on, 'Toshiba' and 'Lenovo' were almost at the same level each year, varying from 6% to 7%.
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, 'Samsung' is the third largest contribution owner, with each statistic overtaking the 10% mark.
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  • market share
  • percentage points
  • market presence
  • ranking
  • market leader
  • least market share
  • total market share
  • market consolidation
  • market diversification
  • new entrants
  • exits
  • highlight
  • compare
  • decline
  • increase
  • improvement
  • loss of ground
  • manufacturer
  • worldwide
  • notebook computer
  • notable
  • significant
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