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A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter: describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the chairs and tables
setup
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. I would like to draw your attention to the inconvenience of the passage for individuals. Ever since your opening people have started to complain about incidents and troubles. The difficulty is narrow access to our home in the street where you have your cafe working. The local community is struggling to walk through the built tables, our flat has many residents, each with different needs. The mothers face problems with strollers, children risk getting injured playing in
such
 a small spot and families can’t seem to fit their cars in the parking spots which
in addition
 to that raises another conundrum: where can individs park their vehicles? You can imagine what inconvenience
this
 situation causes. What is more, I tried to have a conversation with one of your staff members, but nothing seems to be resolving and the problem is getting out of hand. I hope you can settle
this
 matter just by placing the chairs and tables on another corner of your cafe, where the street is wide and inconvenience would not be a problem. I trust
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 will improve. Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
Consider structuring your paragraphs so that each one addresses a single point or idea. This will enhance clarity and coherence.
task achievement
Make sure to specify clearly the actions you'll take if the situation is not resolved, as this could strengthen your position.
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The introduction clearly outlines the purpose of the letter, making it easy for the reader to understand the issue.
suitable writing tone
You maintain a polite and respectful tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for this context.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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