The bar chart shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart demonstrates
a
survey results whereby how many people drink Correct the article-noun agreement
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coffee
and Use synonyms
tea
in different ways Use synonyms
percentagewise
in 5 Australian countries: Correct your spelling
percentage-wise
Sydney
, Use synonyms
Melbourne
, Use synonyms
Brisbane
, Use synonyms
Adelaide
and Use synonyms
Hobart
.
It is, Use synonyms
overall
, apparent that those who went to Linking Words
cafe
for Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
and Use synonyms
tea
showed the highest proportion in all countries except Use synonyms
Adelaide
, with instant Use synonyms
coffee
drinking being the most popular choice. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, drinking fresh Linking Words
coffee
was the least common preference among the same given countries.
Looking at fresh Use synonyms
coffee
drinking Use synonyms
first,
survey participants who bought fresh Linking Words
coffee
in Use synonyms
Sydney
accounted for less than 45%, being the Use synonyms
the
highest in Remove the redundancy
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regard. A Linking Words
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for fresh Use synonyms
coffee
in Use synonyms
Melbourne
made up roughly 42%, about 3 Use synonyms
percent
higher than that of Change the spelling
per cent
Hobart
. 34% of Use synonyms
Adelaide
residents opted for fresh Use synonyms
coffee
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last
4 weeks, followed by Correct article usage
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Brisbane
at 33%.
When it comes to instant Use synonyms
coffee
sales, figures were much higher than the previous one. In Use synonyms
Hobart
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who bought
coffee
constituted slightly less than 55%, taking the lead in fresh Use synonyms
coffee
drinking. That was a bit lower in Use synonyms
Brisbane
, at about 53%. Interestingly, fresh Use synonyms
coffee
in Use synonyms
Adelaide
showed the highest Use synonyms
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although
the percentage of Linking Words
Brisbane
and and Use synonyms
Hobart
in Use synonyms
this
regard was higher. Linking Words
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figure
stood at just below and above 47% in Use synonyms
Sydney
and Use synonyms
Melbourne
, respectively.
As far as cafe visits for Use synonyms
coffee
and Use synonyms
tea
are concerned, 60-64% Use synonyms
people
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of people
coffee
and Use synonyms
tea
in Use synonyms
Sydney
, Use synonyms
Melbourne
and Use synonyms
Hobart
. The Use synonyms
figure
accounted for slightly more than 55% and less than 50% in Use synonyms
Brisbane
and Use synonyms
Adelaide
, proportionally.Use synonyms
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