Cultures around the world are more similar today than they used to be. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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quite similar nowadays,
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is the biggest factor that creates
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connected each other in every part of the
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Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and fully develops the point introduced.
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Conclude your essay with a paragraph summing up your stance on whether cultural similarity due to globalization is positive or negative.
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The essay identifies globalization and technology as key factors contributing to cultural similarities.
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There is an attempt to introduce the positive aspects of globalization in connecting world communities.
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The essay discusses relevant topics relatable for current global trends, highlighting globalization and technology as central issues.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Homogenization
  • Multinational companies
  • Cultural elements
  • Dissemination
  • Social media platforms
  • International tourism
  • Cultural norms
  • Urbanization
  • Modernization
  • Convergence
  • Cultural blending
  • Cultural diversity
  • Media influence
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