The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 Australian countries.

The bar chart gives information about how many people opted

in buying

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and drinking of

coffee

and tea in five varied countries, namely;

Sydney

,

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Melbourne

,

Brisbane

,

Adelaide

and

Hobart

.

Overall

,

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proportion

of

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in terms of people who went to a cafe for

coffee

or tea in

last

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4 weeks was the highest in all countries,except the

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proportion

of

Adelaide

,

while

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the trend

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of purchasing fresh

coffee

in

last

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4 weeks was the

least

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lowest

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.In comparison,it is noticed

an

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average buying

in

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instant

coffee

throughout

the

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all five countries. In detail,most local people in

Sydney

preferred to visit a cafe

for drinking

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coffee

or tea in

last

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4 years,making up 62%,

whereas

Melbourbe

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Melbourne

and

Hobart

had almost the same

proption

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proportion

proportions

,standing at 64% and 63% respectively.In comparison,

population

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of

Adelaide

chose less,at over 50%,being less than the figure of

Brisbane

which levelled off at 56%. Focusing on the results of instant

coffee

,

Brisbane

,

Adelaide

and

Hobart

experienced nearly

same

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level at around 50%-54%,whilst

Melbourbe

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Melbourne

and

Sydney

made up 48% and 46% respectively. When it comes to buying

of

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fresh

coffee

,it

is

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showed the lowest trend in

Brisbane

and

Adelaide

,showing 35% at the same time.

Moreover

,

Sydney

made up much more,at over 44%,

although

Hobart

showed less amount(38%).

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to

Melbourbe

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Melbourne

,it

also

showed nearly 43%,being less than

Sydney

with 1%.