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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided two tables illustrate the data about the value of bananas and
coffee
sales
 by five
diffrent
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different
 countries in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
,
highest
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the highest
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sales
 of
coffee
 by Denmark in 1999 but the UK was
the
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at the
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 top
in
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of
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 the list in 2004.
In
contrast
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contrast,
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 Sweden
was
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had
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 the
least
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lowest
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 value of
coffee
sales
repoted
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reported
 in both years. In terms of banana
sales
, Switzerland
was
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had
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 the highest amount of
sales
 made in both years
while
,
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 Belgium had
lowest
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the lowest
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sales
 in 1990 and Sweden had the minimum in 2004. In 1999, the UK earned 1.5
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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euros from
coffee
 but it
was
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surged up to 20
millions
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million
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 in 2004.
However
,
Denmak
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Denmark
 had 1.8
millions
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million
show examples
sales
 in 1999 but they were able to increase the only 0.2 million in 2004. Switzerland was able to
dubble
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double
 its
sales
 of
coffe
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coffee
 in 2004. When considering bananas,
switzerland
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Switzerland
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 was
in
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at
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 the top of the list which
was
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apply
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made 15 and 47
millions
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million
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 in 1999 and 2004 which boomed more than 3 times
compare
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compared
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 to the
amount
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number
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 of
sales
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that happed
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happed
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happen
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 in 1999. All the countries have
increase
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increased
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 their
sales
 but Denmark
had
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has
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 declined
of
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apply
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its
sale
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sales
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of
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by
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 1.1
millions
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million
show examples
.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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