The table gives information about the employment of university graduates in the U.S. in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart illustrates information about the three types of
employees
of university graduates in New York, Chicago, San Francisco, and Los Use synonyms
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in 2005.
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, among the percentage of total Linking Words
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is the lowest. Except in Chicago, the Use synonyms
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employees
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in total of the three types of jobs, at 60%. The companies have the highest percentage of permanent Use synonyms
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among the four cities, at 55%. The Use synonyms
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in San Francisco and Los Angeles has happened the same.
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condition has appeared in Chicago. The proportion of temporary Use synonyms
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compared with other countries in Use synonyms
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, in four countries. The percentage of overseas Linking Words
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