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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table compares data about
yearly
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the yearly
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 productivity of
milk
 in 4 countries,mainly
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, Australia,
Tanzania
 and
Guatemala
 between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 people in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 got more
milk
 than other countries
in
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during
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all
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apply
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the period.
Moreover
,the least amount of
milk
 was in
the
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apply
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Guatemala
. At the outset,
although
 Guatemalans had 26 thousand
litres
 of
milk
 in 1990, 11262000
litres
 of product
was
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were
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 in the
Netherlands
.
Additionally
, if Australians produced about 11.25 million
litres
, 87.000
litres
was
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were
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 in
Tanzania
 in 1990. 55 thousand L of
milk
 was in
the
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apply
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Guatemala
,though over 11.1 million
litres
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were producted
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producted
Correct your spelling
produced
Netherland's
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Netherlands's
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 people.
Nonetheless
,in 2000 citizens of
Tanzania
 and Australia produced 142.000 and 11.105.000 L respectively.
Furthermore
, if Australians got about 9.2 mln
litres
 in 2010, approximately 11.5 mln was in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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.
However
,
at the end
 of the
period
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period,
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 Humans in
Tanzania
 created 155 thousand
litres
 of
milk
,though 84.000
litres
 was in
Guatemala
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, tanzania, guatemala, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual production
  • country comparison
  • decade analysis
  • fluctuations
  • overall trends
  • increasing/decreasing trends
  • peak production
  • relatively higher/lower
  • production volume
  • significant growth/decrease
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