The chart shows student expenditure over a three-year period in the United Kingdom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows student expenditure over a three-year period in the United Kingdom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the spending of British students from 1996 to 1999 on the 8 various categories of products and services.
Overall
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, the highest proportion of their income was used for accommodation, food/bills/household goods, and entertainment,
whereas
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the lowest percentage was allocated for course
expenditure
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, essential travel, non-essential travel, children, and
other
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others
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. Focusing first on the most significant
expenditure
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, in 1996, over 25% went on entertainment,
while
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after three years, the corresponding figure increased by roughly 5%. As for accommodation, food/bills/household goods, in 1996, between 20 and 25 per cent of students' money was used on these categories,
whereas
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by 1999, these sums dropped slightly, to approximately 20%. As for the remaining categories, in 1996, course
expenditure
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accounted for 10% of general expenses, and for the following
years
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years,
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this
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proportion decreased marginally to nearly 7%. Regarding essential and non-essential
travels
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travel
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, less than 5% of
money
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the money
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young people spent on them throughout the period. With respect to other
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expenditure
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expenditures
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, roughly 10 and 15 per cent of their revenue students allocate for
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this
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these
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needs. Notably, almost none of
youth
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the youth
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had children during their
studentshood
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studenthood
over the 3-year period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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