The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.
The line graph illustrates
about
the Change preposition
apply
number
of Use synonyms
goods
transported in Use synonyms
UK
by four various modes of transportation Correct article usage
the UK
such
as road, water, rail, and pipeline in the Linking Words
years1974
to 2002.
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years 1974
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
goods
transported to the UK showed a Use synonyms
fluctuative
upward and downward, but Correct your spelling
fluctuating
fluctuation
significant
rise over the Correct article usage
a significant
period
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of pipelines tended to be flat three years apply over the Use synonyms
period
.
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toIn
1974, water and rail started from the same Correct your spelling
In
number
, it was nearly 40 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
. Use synonyms
Although
, Linking Words
goods
transported by water increased in the next year, Use synonyms
then
remained steady until 1990, and experienced Linking Words
decrease
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a decrease
fro1994
to 1998. In the meantime, it Change preposition
from fro1994
grew
apply to 60 Add the particle
grew to
million
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tonnes
in 2002.
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On the other hand
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goods
transported by rail straight down to nearly 20 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
from 1978 to 1986, Use synonyms
then
slightly increased nearly to the starting Linking Words
number
in 1990. In 1994, it decreased almost to 20 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
again like the Use synonyms
number
in 1986, but it increased to over 40 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
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at the end
of Linking Words
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period
.
Road transportation had the highest Add an article
the period
number
in the beginning. It began from over 60 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
, Use synonyms
then
fluctuated downward and upward in the next years, but by the end of the Linking Words
period
in 2002, it increased to nearly 100 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, it was very different, pipeline transportation had the lowest Linking Words
number
in the beginning. It began from almost Use synonyms
to
zero Change preposition
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number
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then
continuously increased little by little during the Linking Words
period
, but it remained steady Use synonyms
over
20 Change preposition
at over
million
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tonnes
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at the end
of the Linking Words
period
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