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The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.

The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.
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The line graph illustrates
about
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the
number
 of
goods
 transported in
UK
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the UK
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 by four various modes of transportation
such
 as road, water, rail, and pipeline in the
years1974
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years 1974
 to 2002.
Overall
, the
number
 of
goods
 transported to the UK showed a
fluctuative
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fluctuating
fluctuation
 upward and downward, but
significant
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a significant
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 rise over the
period
,
while
 the
number
 of pipelines tended to be flat three years apply over the
period
.
toIn
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In
 1974, water and rail started from the same
number
, it was nearly 40
million
tonnes
.
Although
,
goods
 transported by water increased in the next year,
then
 remained steady until 1990, and experienced
decrease
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a decrease
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fro1994
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 to 1998. In the meantime, it
grew
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 apply to 60
million
tonnes
 in 2002.
On the other hand
,
goods
 transported by rail straight down to nearly 20
million
tonnes
 from 1978 to 1986,
then
 slightly increased nearly to the starting
number
 in 1990. In 1994, it decreased almost to 20
million
tonnes
 again like the
number
 in 1986, but it increased to over 40
million
tonnes
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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. Road transportation had the highest
number
 in the beginning. It began from over 60
million
tonnes
,
then
 fluctuated downward and upward in the next years, but by the end of the
period
 in 2002, it increased to nearly 100
million
tonnes
.
On the other hand
, it was very different, pipeline transportation had the lowest
number
 in the beginning. It began from almost
to
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zero
number
then
 continuously increased little by little during the
period
, but it remained steady
over
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 20
million
tonnes
at the end
 of the
period
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, goods, period, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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