The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.

The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.
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The line graph illustrates
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the
number
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of
goods
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transported in
UK
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the UK
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by four various modes of transportation
such
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as road, water, rail, and pipeline in the
years1974
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years 1974
to 2002.
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, the
number
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of
goods
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transported to the UK showed a
fluctuative
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fluctuating
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upward and downward, but
significant
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a significant
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rise over the
period
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,
while
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the
number
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of pipelines tended to be flat three years apply over the
period
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.
toIn
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In
1974, water and rail started from the same
number
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, it was nearly 40
million
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tonnes
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.
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,
goods
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transported by water increased in the next year,
then
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remained steady until 1990, and experienced
decrease
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a decrease
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fro1994
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to 1998. In the meantime, it
grew
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apply to 60
million
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tonnes
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in 2002.
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,
goods
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transported by rail straight down to nearly 20
million
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tonnes
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from 1978 to 1986,
then
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slightly increased nearly to the starting
number
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in 1990. In 1994, it decreased almost to 20
million
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tonnes
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again like the
number
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in 1986, but it increased to over 40
million
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tonnes
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at the end
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of
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period
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the period
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. Road transportation had the highest
number
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in the beginning. It began from over 60
million
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tonnes
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,
then
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fluctuated downward and upward in the next years, but by the end of the
period
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in 2002, it increased to nearly 100
million
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tonnes
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.
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, it was very different, pipeline transportation had the lowest
number
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in the beginning. It began from almost
to
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zero
number
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then
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continuously increased little by little during the
period
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, but it remained steady
over
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at over
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20
million
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tonnes
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at the end
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of the
period
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, goods, period, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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