The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two maps illustrate the significant changes that occurred during one decade at the seaside from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, it is evident that the site expanded dramatically in these years. Linking Words
Although
the Residential sites and railways had increased substantially, numerous trees had been cut down to establish a new factory and Linking Words
also
the transportation system had significantly extended, air Linking Words
traveling
was created in 2005.
Change the spelling
travelling
To begin
with, Linking Words
while
some facilities Linking Words
such
as a hospital, school, and park site remained stable during Linking Words
this
period, numerous houses and residential areas were built in 2005. Linking Words
Additionally
, Linking Words
although
a railway station remained in the fixed position, many railways had been expanded during Linking Words
this
decade.
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On the other hand
, a large factory was built in 2005 near the railway station. Linking Words
Moreover
, a huge supermarket was established in residential areas. Linking Words
It is clear that
dramatic constructions over Linking Words
this
period changed the size of buildings, significant number of houses were translated to residential areas.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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