The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Two maps illustrate the significant changes that occurred during one decade at the seaside from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
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, it is evident that the site expanded dramatically in these years.
Although
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the Residential sites and railways had increased substantially, numerous trees had been cut down to establish a new factory and
also
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the transportation system had significantly extended, air
traveling
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travelling
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was created in 2005.
To begin
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with,
while
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some facilities
such
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as a hospital, school, and park site remained stable during
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period, numerous houses and residential areas were built in 2005.
Additionally
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,
although
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a railway station remained in the fixed position, many railways had been expanded during
this
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decade.
On the other hand
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, a large factory was built in 2005 near the railway station.
Moreover
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, a huge supermarket was established in residential areas.
It is clear that
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dramatic constructions over
this
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period changed the size of buildings, significant number of houses were translated to residential areas.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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