The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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Two maps illustrate the significant changes before and after the tourist facilities
construction
on the island
.
Overall
, it is evident that the island
has changed dramatically after the construction
. Although
some trees are planted on the island
, some facilities such
as houses, a restaurant and a reception are built to attract tourists.
To begin
with, while
the number of trees has increased over the construction
, footprints and vehicle track roads are designed to increase convenience. Additionally
, some accommodations are established on the island
. It is noticeable that the beach is now appropriate for swimming.
Moreover
, after construction
, while
the reception is located approximately in the centre of the island
, the restaurant is built north of the reception. One more significant option is the houses ,which are located across the island
. It is clear that
some boats are added to attract tourists.Submitted by mahanz on
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