The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The diagram depicts the
library
's floor design 20 years ago, and its current layout.
At first glance, the library
's site has undergone significant modifications over the last
20 years, in which four rooms were remodeled
and parts of physical Change the spelling
remodelled
books
were reduced. Additionally
, the computers and machines were upgraded showing the library
has a tendency to shift from physical books
to digital collections.
In the past, the two cyclic tables and the number of surrounding chairs immediately in front of the entrance were now removed, moreover
, the rooms on the left corner contained the CDs, videos, and computer games are now expanded and repurposed into the children's section. The room
in the bottom left corner of the library
previously the reading room
was transformed into the computer room
to alter the traditional books
into the digital data book.
The curve inquiry desk in the past used for getting tickets, and returning books
has been relocated and modernized to create a more welcoming and efficient entry point for visitors. In addition
, the reception after removal was used to put up a new cafe, and the room
on the top right corner was also
converted into the lecture room
, while
the shelved adult nonfiction book has been replaced by adult fiction books
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