The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
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The line graph illustrates information regarding the report from 2008 which was related to the consumption of
energy
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in the U.S.A. from 1980 to projections until 2030.
Overall
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, it is crystal clear that oil is one of the most preferable sources of
energy
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production in past, present
as well as
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in future.
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, it is predicted that the use of natural gas will be overtaken by coal.
To begin
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with, nuclear, solar and hydropower
energy
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was not in much use in past starting from 2 quadrillion
units
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but it is predicted that wind
energy
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will be the
last
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second-largest source of power production followed by Nuclear which will be predicted to reach 6 quadrillion
units
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. Apart from the
last
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three fuels, petrol was at the top in 1980 and it maintained its consistency by reaching 40 in 2000 and 50 quadrillion
units
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in 2030.
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, coal was almost 5
units
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ahead of natural gas but after facing several fluctuations it reached 30 which is 7 more than gas.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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