The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the
percentage
of females aged 16 to 25 in a particular country who participated in sports
, compared with the percentage
of people who watched them in 2000.
Overall
, the most popularity
of various Replace the word
popular
sport
was basket basketball, because it had the highest and Fix the agreement mistake
sports
alomost
balanced Correct your spelling
almost
percentage
between participants
in sports
and people who watched them. It was opposite
with horse riding and racing which had the lowest Correct article usage
the opposite
percantage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
participants
and watchers
. And the
other Correct word choice
The
sports
such
as tennis, gymnastics, badminton, golf
tended to be significantly unbalanced between the Correct word choice
and golf
participants
of the sports
and the watchers
.
The percentage
between participants
and watchers
of basketball was about 50% to approch
60%. It was not the highest Correct your spelling
approach
percentage
of participants
, but it remained steady percentage
. On the other hand
, tennis had a unbalanced percentages
between the Correct the article-noun agreement
an unbalanced percentage
unbalanced percentages
participants
and the watchers
. It had the highest percentage
of participants
, about 60% of participants
, but the percentage
of the watcher was a
half of the Change the article
apply
participants
. The other sports
like gymnastics, badminton, and golf had unbalanced of
Change preposition
apply
participants
and watchers
too. The ratio was almost half and a quarter between participants
and watchers
. And the
most unpopular Correct word choice
The
sports
was
horse riding and racing, the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
percentage
of the
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apply
participants
and the
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apply
watchers
of the sport was the lowest.Submitted by imeldarosari6 on
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