The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below compare the
proportion
of different energy Use synonyms
productions
in France between 1995 and 2005.
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production
Overall
, Linking Words
whereas
the consumption of Linking Words
petrol
decreased over Use synonyms
this
period of time, the opposite could be seen in the other energy. Strikingly, the fossil fuels accounted for a very large majority
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The fossil
fuels reached a very large majority. In 1995, Coal had the highest Correct article usage
Fossil
proportion
with 29.80%, followed by gas Use synonyms
with
29,63% and Change preposition
at
petrol
Use synonyms
29,27
%. After 10 years, the Change preposition
at 29,27
proportion
of coal and Use synonyms
petrol
witnessed Use synonyms
slight
increase. Add an article
a slight
Also
, coal was still the highest in the percentage of fossil fuels in France. Linking Words
By contrast
, the Linking Words
proportion
of Use synonyms
petrol
decreased significantly to 19,55%.
Renewable energy had the minority. In 1995, nuclear reached 6.40% Use synonyms
while
other was lower than nuclear with only 4.90%. In 2005, the Linking Words
proportion
of nuclear and other steady growth. Use synonyms
However
, the percentage of nuclear weapons was still higher than Linking Words
other
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, petrol with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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