The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projections to 2040.

The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projections to 2040.
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The provided graph demonstrates the percentage of the population living in cities from 1970 to 2020 and its projections for 2040 in the Phillippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia.
Overall
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, Malaysia had the highest value exceeding the 85% rate in 2040, even though originally it was exactly 30%.
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, Thailand's figure was the lowest, as it did not reach even 50% throughout the changes. Taking a closer look, it can be clearly seen that each country's number of people in cities grew over the 70-year-long period with Malaysia having the greatest surge and increasing its original value by almost 3 times;
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,
while
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most of these Asian countries showed steady growth, Phillippines was the only country that was notably fluctuating.
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, Thailand
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showed some kind of fluctuation, but it was not that significant.
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, in 1970, each country did not exceed the 35% rate, but by the end of 2040 all of them demonstrated a unique level of rise, where some took first place, and some took
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place.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • proportion
  • projected
  • trend
  • population density
  • metropolitan areas
  • socio-economic factors
  • infrastructure
  • migration
  • policy changes
  • population pressure
  • economic opportunities
  • urban growth rates
  • globalization
  • technology
  • depopulation
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