The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The given diagram provides
infromation
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information
and
instructure
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structure
in structure
of
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the central public library and
it's
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development after 20 years.
overall
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, it can be seen that there is a significant change
over
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in
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use
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the use
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of available rooms.
Firstly
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, tables and
chair
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has
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have been
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removed from the center,
enquiry
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the enquiry
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desk
in
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is
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now
use
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used
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as the coffee shop and children's
book
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books
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are now available
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at
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a
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specific room where there is
sofa
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a sofa
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provided.
Secoundly
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Secondly
,
information
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the information
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desk in now
relocated
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to another part of the library near Adult fiction books and there
is
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are
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self-
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self-service
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service-machines
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machines
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provided which
was
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were
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not available 20 years ago. The place which was
using
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used
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as
reading
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a reading
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room is now
completly
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completely
changed to
computer
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the computer
a computer
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room.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • undergo changes
  • reading room
  • central area
  • digital resources
  • physical books
  • collections
  • children's section
  • multimedia room
  • cater to
  • diverse needs
  • study rooms
  • private study spaces
  • reception area
  • modernized
  • shelving units
  • open spaces
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