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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The given diagram provides
infromation
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information
 and
instructure
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structure
in structure
of
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on
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 the central public library and
it's
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its
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 development after 20 years.
overall
, it can be seen that there is a significant change
over
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in
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use
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the use
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 of available rooms.
Firstly
, tables and
chair
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chairs
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has
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have been
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 removed from the center,
enquiry
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the enquiry
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 desk
in
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is
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 now
use
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used
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 as the coffee shop and children's
book
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books
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 are now available
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in at
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at
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a
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 specific room where there is
sofa
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a sofa
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 provided.
Secoundly
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Secondly
,
information
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the information
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 desk in now
relocated
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been relocated
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 to another part of the library near Adult fiction books and there
is
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are
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self-
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self-service
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service-machines
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machines
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 provided which
was
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were
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 not available 20 years ago. The place which was
using
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used
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 as
reading
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a reading
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 room is now
completly
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completely
 changed to
computer
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the computer
a computer
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 room.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • undergo changes
  • reading room
  • central area
  • digital resources
  • physical books
  • collections
  • children's section
  • multimedia room
  • cater to
  • diverse needs
  • study rooms
  • private study spaces
  • reception area
  • modernized
  • shelving units
  • open spaces
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