You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Country B's economy in 2005 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Country B's economy in 2005 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart provides information regarding Brazil's economy in five different industrial fields over a period of 10 years.
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, it can be seen that finance would be the highest number of shares with more than 35% in 2019 and it will increase to more than 40% in 2029.
Firstly
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, more than 30% of financial
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had an impact on Brazil's economy and it has significantly increased in 2019
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there will be an estimation to rise up
untill
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until
2029. Manufacturing process and food processing have the lowest percentage
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to other data with 30% in food processing in 2019 and 30% of manufacturing in 2009
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, it is predicted to fall down to less than 5% in manufacturing and about 10% in food processing. Tourism is going to remain steady in the future
while
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there will be a decrease in oil, coal and gas production
whereas
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, they had more than 30% of numbers in 2019.
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