The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram displays information about the stock
price
of Outokumpu companies in markets with Euros as the currency from the first
year
of 2006 until
last
year
2010.
Overall
, the value fluctuated significantly, with the highest
price
in the middle of 2006 and the lowest happening between 2008 and 2009. In the first launch, the
price
started at over 10€ and grew quickly and peaked in the half
year
of 2006 at three times higher than the first
price
of the offering. Afterwards, the stock fell steadily
although
it had a speedy recovery in 2008 by nearly reaching the peak
of
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price
before.
However
, after the
year
2008, the company's worth plunged deeply and hit a low at around 7€ in the middle
year
.
Nevertheless
, the graph of markets trying to grow and tends to stagnant
price
mode after the
year
2009 until the end of the month of 2010 by hanging around 10€ to 15€.
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