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The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram displays information about the stock
price
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 of Outokumpu companies in markets with Euros as the currency from the first
year
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 of 2006 until
last
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year
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 2010.
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, the value fluctuated significantly, with the highest
price
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 in the middle of 2006 and the lowest happening between 2008 and 2009. In the first launch, the
price
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 started at over 10€ and grew quickly and peaked in the half
year
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 of 2006 at three times higher than the first
price
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 of the offering. Afterwards, the stock fell steadily
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 it had a speedy recovery in 2008 by nearly reaching the peak
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price
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 before.
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, after the
year
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 2008, the company's worth plunged deeply and hit a low at around 7€ in the middle
year
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.
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, the graph of markets trying to grow and tends to stagnant
price
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 mode after the
year
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 2009 until the end of the month of 2010 by hanging around 10€ to 15€.

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