The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in town in Australia are currently attending. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main futures,and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in town in Australia are currently attending. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main futures,and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrate the places and kinds of dance classes young people in the city in Australia are attending. The
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measured in percentages and the bar
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measured by age.
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, private studios are the most prevalent destinations for practising. the type of dance class in the par
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under 11 age. Both bar
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have the same fluctuations.
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, the private student was at a higher place in attendance among all locations 48 per cent. On the opposite , college-based studios were lowest compared to other places at 10 per cent. Meanwhile, attending in community halls & other and school halls ( after-school ) the difference between them only 6%. In terms of par
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, ballet is the most preferable class as roughly 600 juniors study it. In the same type of dancing people between 11-16, their attendance at class has decreased.
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, the quantities of young people participating in tap dance in both age groups are quite similar
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