What do you believe is the most important problem facing the world today? Why is it the most important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I think that

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air

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pollution

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and traffic jams are the most vital concern facing the globe today.The reasons for

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are

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the negligence of citizens and the government's skipping crimes like the penalty for even the overlimited litter and the garbage

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tossed in mistaken areas. Every individual is responsible for the

well-fare

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welfare

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of families without traffic jams which they face

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every morning

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going to work or school.

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Air

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air

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pollution

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that

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leads to

flood

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floods

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, drought and

extreme

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extremely

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hot weather

in particular

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parts of the world.

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, in

Africa

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Africa,

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citizens are suffering from the

scarce

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of water. On the one hand ,

air

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pollution

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is a hot topic among individuals in many parts of the world especially in Asian countries and

African

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mainland. Causes for

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are

overwhelming

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the overwhelming

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of

cars

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in society

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and the

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poisonous gases which

are

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come from them . People have indifference for

environment

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the environment

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by throwing their rubbish to local places . Burning of fossil fuels

are

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is

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made by humans in their homes by burning coal,

gas

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and gas

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for energy

produce

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produces

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pollutants. Agricultural activities

are playing

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play

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a vital role. Farmers are not utilizing natural

fertilizer

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fertilizers

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instead

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of artificial ones.

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, natural events like volcanic

eruption

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eruptions

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, forest fires,and dust storms can contribute to

air

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pollution

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. As an example

for

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of

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this

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, deforestation is a part of them too. The

numbers

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number

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of trees in parks and social locations

are

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is

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reducing

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the

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absorption of carbon dioxide increasing

air

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pollution

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.

To come

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to the traffic jams ,people are

being

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becoming

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rich and purchase limitless

cars

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for their projects . They are using their

cars

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for

even

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shops to buy needs

for

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them

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in emergency situations. Youngsters are interested in driving luxury

cars

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. By the way of conclusion, the problems in society are more and more. If I calculate all of them there is

not

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no

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limit. People are "causing actors"in

such

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fields. They should be responsible for their environment and the activities which are happening around them.