Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps displayed Tarnagul city development between 1900 and 2000.
Overall
, the small
town
located close to Melbourne, called Tarnagul was totally redeveloped over the time period. In 1900, a place for dairy production was on the left side of the river. In the middle, there was a centre of the
town
that the road passed from the right corner into the left corner of the map. Oranges and Mandarins gardens were located in the north and south of the
town
area. Fifty years later, the dairy field was demolished and replaced with lemon and grapefruit gardens.
Similarly
, a field previously used for cultivating mandarins was transformed into an orange plantation.
In addition
, there were
two
packing sheds in the right corner of the map and the tracks were added to divide the
two
sheds. Yet the
town
area location was not changed but the size became bigger.
Furthermore
, there were significant changes in 2000. The garden on the north-west of the river was knocked down and removed into a wildlife sanctuary.
Likewise
,
two
gardens around the
town
area became unused.
However
, the park was added beside unused land in the south of the road. The tracks were removed and the
two
warehouses were made into a local museum and craft market.
Lastly
, a tourist shop was built near the road.
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