The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph compares the amounts of clothing exported from three nations between 1999 and 2003.
Overall
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, Colombia and
Myanmar
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grew compared to their starting points,
while
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Japan only saw a slight decrease.
Moreover
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, Colombian and Japanese
exports
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fluctuated slightly over the years, but
Myanmar
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exports
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were quite volatile. In 1999,
Myanmar
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exported far less than 100 million dollars compared to two other states that started with more than 400 amounts.
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, between 1999 and 2000,
Myanmar
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apparel
exports
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skyrocketed, surpassing both countries with 800 amounts.
On the other hand
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, there was a small gap between Japanese and Colombian
exports
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amounted to nearly 530 million in 2000.
Myanmar
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’s apparel shipment overseas started climbing in 2000, reaching a peak of 920,000,000 in 2001 before dropping significantly in 2000 and rebounding in 2003 for the final value of 420,000,000.
Besides
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that, Colombia exported their fashion items modestly higher than Japan, reaching 650,000,000 in 2001. Despite Colombia showing a minor rise in 2002 with 700,000,000 as their peak season, Japan represented a descending trend over the
last
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2-year period with just under five hundred million dollars in the end.
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