The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the survey summary about the Parkway Hotel guest service in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
customers
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assistance level has increased for the five-year period reducing the number of bad ratings more than twice.
First,
more than a third rates were "Poor" and "Very poor" having 21% and 15% respectively in 2005.
However
,
this
number has significantly decreased in 2010 to 12 and 4%.
Furthermore
, good and excellent ratings
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sharply risen considering the
overall
percentage below a quarter in 2005 which can be compared with the
2010's
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rates having 39% and 28% respectively. Satisfactory rates were at 17% in 2010 taking less than 75% of
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chart, as opposed to those 45% in 2005.
In contrast
, just above
the
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half hotel visitors were satisfied with the service provided.
Although
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, "Satisfactory" opinions were cut more than
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half showing a rapid fall throughout the whole period.
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