The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare the survey summary about the Parkway Hotel guest service in 2005 and 2010.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the

customers

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assistance level has increased for the five-year period reducing the number of bad ratings more than twice.

First,

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more than a third rates were "Poor" and "Very poor" having 21% and 15% respectively in 2005.

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this

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number has significantly decreased in 2010 to 12 and 4%.

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, good and excellent ratings

has

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sharply risen considering the

overall

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percentage below a quarter in 2005 which can be compared with the

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rates having 39% and 28% respectively. Satisfactory rates were at 17% in 2010 taking less than 75% of

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chart, as opposed to those 45% in 2005.

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, just above

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half hotel visitors were satisfied with the service provided.

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, "Satisfactory" opinions were cut more than

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half showing a rapid fall throughout the whole period.

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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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