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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
consumption
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 of
coffee
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 and
tea
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 in
Canada
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, The United Kingdom, The United States, and
Germany
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.
Initially
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, The United Kingdom had a high
consumption
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 level of
tea
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,
while
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Canada
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 and the US showed the lowest
tea
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 serving.
Germany
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 consumed the
amount
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 of
coffee
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,
whereas
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 the UK was the least
coffee
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 demanding. To commence with
coffee
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consumption
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,
Canada
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 and the US consumed 40000
tonnes
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, respectively.
Germany
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 consumed 50000
tonnes
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, but the UK recorded the lowest
amount
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 among others it was 30000
tonnes
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.
In contrast
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, the UK served the highest
amount
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 of
tea
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; it was 80000
tonnes
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, which is the highest value recorded in the chart. But the US and
Canada
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 were 20000
tonnes
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, respectively.
Germany
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 showed a moderate
consumption
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 level; it was 40000
tonnes
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. In comparison to all values,
Germany
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 consumed a reasonable
amount
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 of stimulant beverages.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, coffee, tea, canada, germany, amount, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • import volumes
  • significant similarities or differences
  • trends
  • analyze
  • encapsulate
  • main findings
  • comparison
  • notably
  • illustrates
  • respective countries
  • amounts imported
  • tea imports
  • coffee imports
  • hints at underlying factors
  • proportion
  • per capita consumption
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