OUR ASSIGNMENT👇: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear sly, I hope

this

letter

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you well. I am Travelling to your city next month

from15

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from 15

December to 25 December during my

vocations

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vacation

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. I was planning to spend my

vocation

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vacation

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in Toronto . Unfortunately, I am unable to book any hotel in

toronto

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its

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chrismas

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Christmas

time

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all hotels are already booked.

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Hence

, I am asking you whether I can stay at your place since you live in Toronto. As your place is not far from downtown it will be easy for me to travel and

experince

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experience

diffrent

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different

life for

few

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days. Mostly, I will be out in

city

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the city

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Morever

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, I would like to pay for my expenses. I do not mean to offend you with

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as I do not want to be

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you .Please let me know in case I cannot stay at

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place. I hope to hear from you soon. your lovingly, Jasmeen.

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Structure

In your response, make sure to organize your letter into clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a specific point or idea to enhance clarity and readability.

Grammar

Be mindful of minor spelling and grammatical errors. Correct errors such as 'chrismas' to 'Christmas', 'hence' to 'Hence', and 'burden' to 'a burden'.

Coherence

To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure smooth transitions between different parts of the letter, providing a logical flow of ideas.

Completeness

You've clearly addressed all required points in the task, giving enough information about your visit dates, your request to stay, and offering to cover expenses.

Tone

The tone of your letter is polite and respectful, which is fitting for writing to a relative.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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*OUR ASSIGNMENT*👇: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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OUR ASSIGNMENT👇: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.