The tables show the sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables depict the
amount
of shipments of coffee and bananas that had Fairtrade-labelled in five nations in 1999 and 2004. Change the quantifier
number
Overall
, sales
of coffee increased after five years in all countries while
sales
of bananas dropped in two countries.
Looking in more detail, coffee selling in the UK had the most increment compared to the four other states, rising from 1.5 million
euros in 1999 to 20 million
euros in 2000. Followed by Switzerland
income reached double from 3 to 6. Despite Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden Change noun form
Switzerland's
also
showing an upward trend but
the revenue remained under 2 Correct word choice
apply
million
in both years.
When considering banana trading, the United Kingdom continued leading the majority of the fairtrade-banana
. Correct your spelling
fair trade banana
Also
, it accounted more than a two-fold increase in 2004, reaching for 47 million
euros. Nevertheless
, a surge in sales
also
exhibiting
in the figure of Wrong verb form
exhibited
sales
of Switzerland and Denmark (from 1 and 0.6 to 5.5 and 4, respectively). In contrast
, there was a dwindling in revenue in Belgium and Sweden, which made up from 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9, respectively.Submitted by nineband9s on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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