Task 1: The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table and pie charts below provide information about the
police
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budget
in 2017 and 2018 in one territory in Britain. The data in the table shows the source of funds and how the Use synonyms
budget
was spent.
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Overall
, Linking Words
according to
the charts, in 2018 Linking Words
police
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budget
was higher than in 2017. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, from the pie charts, we can see that in 2017 the amount of money spent on Linking Words
salaries
was higher than in 2018.
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Firstly
, in 2017 total Linking Words
police
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budget
was 304.8 Use synonyms
m
which was funded mostly by the government with 175.5 Use synonyms
m
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
budget
was financed with 91.2m by taxes and 38m by grants. Alternatively, in 2018 the Use synonyms
budget
was slightly higher and summed up to 318.6m, where 177.8m was funded by a national government, 102.3m was taken from taxes and 38.5m was financed from other sources.
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Furthermore
, in 2017 75% of the total Linking Words
budget
was spent on officers and staff Use synonyms
salaries
, 17% was used for buildings and transport development and 8% was spent on technology. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, in 2018 money spent on Linking Words
salaries
gently decreased to 69% Use synonyms
while
the technology Linking Words
budget
sharply increased to 14%.
Taking everything into consideration, the Use synonyms
police
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budget
in 2018 was higher compared to 2017, but in 2018 finance for Use synonyms
salaries
was lower and technology funds were higher, which indicates that in 2018 extra money from the total Use synonyms
budget
was used for technological development.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, salaries, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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