You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. You should write at least 150 words.
The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Spot on from the table, Perth is being of the 5 cities in Australia which has
high
average bill per household Correct article usage
a high
as well as
charge
per kiloliter (over 125 KL). Compared to Melbourne,Correct article usage
a charge
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