The charts below give information about travel to and from France, as well as the most popular countries for French citizens to visit in 2000.
The given line graph demonstrates data on how many people
of
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in
UK
visited abroad, and how many overseas residents visited to
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apply
UK
between 1979 and 1999, while
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data about how many people visited Verb problem
shows
to
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apply
UK
from 5 countries in 1999.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that figure of people who visited to
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UK
increased significantly from 1979 to 1999, but statistics
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UK
, experienced Correct article usage
a slightly
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France was dominant in 1999, but Change preposition
to
this
trend in Turkey considerable less than one.
As regards number
of tourists who visited the Change the article
a number
the number
UK
gradually increased from 13 to 20 between 1979 and 1984; however
, this
trend experienced Correct article usage
a sharply
sharply rose
in the next 11 years. Replace the word
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Moreover
, statistics
of overseas inhabitants who came in
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to
UK
between 1979 and 1984, remained unchanged at 10 but rapidly rose from 10 to 25 in the next decade.
When it comes to Correct article usage
the UK
number
of residents of France who visited the Change the article
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the number
UK
was dominant at 12 in the 1999 years. Additionally
, statistics
of the Spain in the next list of the topic at 8 in the year. Conversely
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trend in Turkey hit the
lowest point at 3 in 1999. Change the word
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, statistics
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