The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The provided diagram demonstrates the seven-step process of
sugar
being produced from
sugar
cane.
Overall
, the process begins with growing and harvesting
sugar
canes
, followed by a series of mechanical and chemical treatments, which convert raw
canes
into refined
sugar
. In the first stage,
sugar
canes
are cultivated over 12 to 18 months until they mature. The harvested
canes
are
then
either combined manually or processed using machines. Once collected, the
canes
are crushed to extract their juice. In the fourth stage, the extracted juice undergoes purification using a limestone filter to eliminate impurities.
Then
, the purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water to make a thick syrup, which is afterwards spun in a centrifuge which separates
sugar
crystals from syrup.
Finally
, the crystals are dried and cooled, resulting in the production of refined
sugar
suitable for consumption.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, canes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultivation
  • harvesting
  • mechanically
  • juice extraction
  • purifying
  • impurities
  • evaporation
  • concentration
  • crystallization
  • centrifuges
  • distribution
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