The table below shows the percentage of household and electronic goods in New Zealand in 2002 and 2020

The table below shows the percentage of household and electronic goods in New Zealand in 2002 and 2020
The table provides information about the percentage of
households
in New Zealand which owned different types of electronic goods between 2002 and 2020.
Overall
, the percentages of
households
that possessed( Sở hữu) washing
machine
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, color
TV
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,
computer
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, cell
phone
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phones
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,
dishwasher
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, and digital
camera
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increased,
while
the reverse was true for the figures for video
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. In 2002, washing machines and
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TV were
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most popularly owned electronic goods, with 97% and 95% of
households
owning them, respectively.In 2020, the percentages increased even more, ranging from 98% to 99%.
In contrast
,video recorders
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owned by 75% of
household
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households
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in 2002, after that, decreased to 60% in 2020. Meanwhile, cell
phone
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and digital
camera
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were not the most popular electronic goods among
households
in
this
nation,
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ownership rates
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increased dramatically from 2002 to 2020.
While
only 2% owned a digital camera and 20% had a cell phone in 2002, the proportions increased to 40% and 80% after only 18 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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