The table below shows the percentage of household and electronic goods in New Zealand in 2002 and 2020
The table provides information about the percentage of
households
in New Zealand which owned different types of electronic goods between 2002 and 2020.
Overall
, the percentages of households
that possessed( Sở hữu) washing machine
, color Fix the agreement mistake
machines
TV
, Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
computer
, cell Fix the agreement mistake
computers
phone
, Fix the agreement mistake
phones
dishwasher
, and digital Fix the agreement mistake
dishwashers
camera
increased, Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
while
the reverse was true for the figures for video recorder
.
In 2002, washing machines and Fix the agreement mistake
recorders
color
TV were Change the spelling
colour
two
most popularly owned electronic goods, with 97% and 95% of Correct article usage
the two
households
owning them, respectively.In 2020, the percentages increased even more, ranging from 98% to 99%.In contrast
,video recorders was
owned by 75% of Change the verb form
were
household
in 2002, after that, decreased to 60% in 2020.
Meanwhile, cell Fix the agreement mistake
households
phone
and digital Fix the agreement mistake
phones
camera
were not the most popular electronic goods among Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
households
in this
nation, the
ownership rates Change the word
their
of
Change preposition
apply
them
increased dramatically from 2002 to 2020. Correct pronoun usage
apply
While
only 2% owned a digital camera and 20% had a cell phone in 2002, the proportions increased to 40% and 80% after only 18 years.Submitted by midden-02.tore on
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