The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.
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The bar chart illustrates percentages of outdoor activities for
males
and females in different age brackets in Australia in 2010.
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Overall
, women in Australia are generally similar in physical performance of all ages. Linking Words
While
men in Linking Words
effort
have noticeable instability at different ages. Add an article
the effort
an effort
However
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males
and females in 65 and over have the same physical activity.
As can be seen in the graph, Use synonyms
males
between 15 to 24 accounted for 52 per cent. Use synonyms
In contrast
, as years go by the effort in Linking Words
males
decreases to 39 per cent.Use synonyms
Moreover
, men between 25 to 34 and 45 to 54 both have the same physical activity of about 43%. As for females, women between 15 to 34 the workout went down a little at nearly 48%. Linking Words
Whereas
, in their early youth from the age of 35 to the beginning of the elderly, 64 years, are quite similar in their rates of workout.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males with synonyms.
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