The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph compares the
number
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of movies produced by five nations in 2007, 2008, and 2009. At first glance, it becomes clear that the country named A produced
highest
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number
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of movies in all three years. In
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nation
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B and C, there was a general upward trend in
the
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film production. On the other side, Country
D
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movie production decreased and increased
while
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the
number
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of films produced by
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nation
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E remained relatively stable. At the onset, it is evident that the
most
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highest
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number
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of movies produced by
nation
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A stood at just under 90 in the first two years and
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to 80 by 2009.
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Whereas
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nation
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B started at 50 films in the years 2007 and 2008.
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However
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it double to 70 by 2009.
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, the
number
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of films produced by country C started at below 10 in 2007 and finished at just under 20 in 2009.
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nation
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D had the highest
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in 2007 at 16
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decreased to 10 and
then
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again increased to 15 in 2009.
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, the
nation
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E remained relatively stable throughout these time periods, numbering closer to 10.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, nation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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