The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the
number
of movies produced by five nations in 2007, 2008, and 2009.
At first glance, it becomes clear that the country named A produced Use synonyms
highest
Change the article
the highest
number
of movies in all three years. In Use synonyms
Use synonyms
nation
B and C, there was a general upward trend in Fix the agreement mistake
nations
the
film production. On the other side, Country Correct article usage
apply
D
movie production decreased and increased Change noun form
D's
while
the Linking Words
number
of films produced by Use synonyms
Use synonyms
nation
E remained relatively stable.
At the onset, it is evident that the Capitalize word
Nation
most
Correct word choice
highest
number
of movies produced by Use synonyms
nation
A stood at just under 90 in the first two years and Use synonyms
reduce
to 80 by 2009. Wrong verb form
reduced
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Whereas
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Whereas Nation
nation
B started at 50 films in the years 2007 and 2008. Use synonyms
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However
it double to 70 by 2009.
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However,
Further
, the Linking Words
number
of films produced by country C started at below 10 in 2007 and finished at just under 20 in 2009. Use synonyms
Conversely
, Linking Words
the
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apply
nation
D had the highest Use synonyms
number
in 2007 at 16 Use synonyms
then
decreased to 10 and Linking Words
then
again increased to 15 in 2009.
Linking Words
Finally
, the Linking Words
nation
E remained relatively stable throughout these time periods, numbering closer to 10.Use synonyms
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