In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some people predict that in foreseeing future, people will not spend money on print media or books to get
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, as they will turn towards digital sources of knowledge free of cost.
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that online sources of
news
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days
due to
their several benefits. First of all,
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these days, it is very easy to access all
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through online channels.
For example
, every
news
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youtube
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. You just have to open
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channel of your choice and start watching the
news
. Another advantage of
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system is that you can save the information for future reading.
For instance
, I save all
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articles for my leisure time whenever I find a link
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these articles on social media. The second most important benefit of
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websites
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is that you can download a book from some specific
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websites
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free of cost, which is very expensive in hard copy.
For example
, I needed a book titled” Anatomical
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of TMJ
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, that’s
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is about 200 USD at medical
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. My friend Mr. Ali, downloaded it from a
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website
within seconds without paying a single penny.
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acess
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of my surgical cases. In conclusion,
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essential sources of knowledge even today, I believe that online
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and books are going to replace them completely very soon
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access
and being completely free.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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