The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts the
percentage
of workplaces of Canadians in five businesses in two years, 1850 and 2020.
It can be clearly seen that in manufacturing the Use synonyms
percentage
was 36% in 1850, Use synonyms
while
in 2020, the Linking Words
percentage
went down to 9%.In services the amount of workforce was 33% in 1850, Use synonyms
whereas
it went up to 81% in 2020.whilst in agriculture and fishing, the Linking Words
percentage
was just 1% in 2020 but in 1850, it was 22%.The highest value Use synonyms
percentage
was 81% in the service industry in 2020.
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Furthermore
, in 1850, in construction and Linking Words
energy
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energy,
percentage
of the workforce was different by 2%.Use synonyms
However
, in 2020, the Linking Words
percentage
increased to 8% in construction but in energy and water the values lower to just 1%.
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Overall
, it is noticeable that the Linking Words
percentage
of the workforce in agriculture and fishing and energy was relatively the same Use synonyms
in contrast
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percentage
of services was most up Use synonyms
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